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Elventine 2008-07-07 ch 14,	abuseI found myself with a lot of free time when school ended, and didn't know what to do with it. But then I remembered this fic of yours, and I must say I still enjoy it. I'm just sad that you haven't updated. And I do like this chapter, it's very thought-oriented. Not that the others aren't, but your poor chapters will cry if you diss them too much. UPDATE PLEASE =D
Chowdizzle 2008-06-29 ch 1,	abuseI just wanted to let you know, that your stories here on Fictionpress are most definetely not bad! I'm not a big slash reader, but Jeeves is one of my favourite stories. As in, there's really only been two slash stories I've ever liked a lot, and Jeeves is one of them. I think that you make the characters so real... and they have depth. They're not the typical fictionpress characters. I mean, yeah it wasn't perfect, sometimes you seemed to have organizational issues, but the story and the characters are so refreshing that it makes up for it. I'm not gonna beg you to finish Jeeves, because I can respect the fact that you've moved on from the story, and as unfortunate as that can be for the readers :( lol, it happens. Writing should be fun, and not a chore. But yeah, after reading your profile I just had to let you know that this is a great story and that you should put more faith in yourself! :) Hope for all of us readers' sakes that inspiration strikes you again sometime in the future!
Smatchimo 2008-06-11 ch 14, anon.	abuseI totally think you should continue this, if the inspiration strikes. I love this story so much I wish I could send you some inspiration myself = / I love all the characters, they're unique but not overdone, if you know what I mean by that. They have character but there's still room for development, which is good and hard to do. I think the pace of the story works well for it. You can tell from the first few chapters that you had something different in mind than what it ends up being, but I like where it's going =) The writing itself is a strong aspect to the story. Your writing is subtle, never pointing anything out unnecessarily and leaving a lot to the imagination. Very very few grammatical mistakes, the time you must spend editing is apparent. All that having been said, I HAVE to know how these boys finally get together. I really hope you continue with this. I'm hooked.
Yaleni 2008-06-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow, just by reading some of the reviews, I can tell that you are getting alot of support and you definitely should continue writing (not with this particular piece though, if you don't want) and improving (I'm not sure if you're not). I can already see you like writng but the way you write it doesn't seem the way you want it to be. You should never put your self down, alwyas hope for the better. In the meantime, you should seek for a beta and I wish you the best. Good luck! And don't forget, you have the potential to write as good as any other person^^
Sidderiffic 2008-05-30 ch 14,	abuseI just saw the disclaimer in the first chapter and I wanted to say that you have way too little faith in yourself and your abilities. While it's true that we'll always be our own worst critic, we should also have some faith in ourselves. I personally think you are amazing and while reading this story I've been taking little mental notes on descriptions that I loved and little stylistic things that I think could inspire me to improve my own writing. Honestly, some of the phrases you churn out are amazing! Every sentence matters. I don't skim over anything to get to the exciting stuff because every part of this story is brilliant. I know you probably think I'm giving you far more praise than you deserve, but what I think you deserve is a little moment of pride in how talented and amazing you are. Should you choose to continue with this story, I will continue to be a faithful reader! Thank you for the incredible read thus far and I really really hope I'll get to see what happens to Bosco next! -Sidd
Iizolda 2008-05-13 ch 13,	abuseAny chances for updates soon? This story is really good :)
the-truth-is-verity 2008-04-10 ch 14,	abuseoh. very interesting! i like it. i really like it, actually. keep writing, and update soon please ? :)
InSilverShadows 2008-02-27 ch 14,	abusewipes brow Whew. Just finished it all. XD I don't think it has lots of problems, necessarily, but there can be points where dialogue (probably in order to convey information) sounds a little forced--like bad acting. :P Your characters can sort of pop out of their personalities, but it's rare for the most part. I think you should invest in a good, loyal, but brutally honest beta reader--it would really help, I think, because this is a very good start. :)
True.Randomness 2008-02-17 ch 14,	abuseMy God. This story is really go but at the same time it has a lot of problems. Like the charavter seeming out of character from time to time. Still I like it and can't wait till the next chapeter comes out. About how many more are left by the way?
applecinnamon 2008-01-12 ch 14, anon.	abuseThere is being a problem here. I clicky the place where the 'next' button is supposed to be, but nothing happens! Go figure. >.> Seriously though, this is a good story. I've avoided it for so long - only getting six or seven chapters in - but eventually i was curious enough to read the whole thing, almost in one sitting. (thank you, Mr. Rhinovirus) Very tasty how Bosco has a yarmulke kink. Or something of that general-ish variety. I don't really like Gretchen, mostly because she's wimpy. Ish. As far as i can tell, anyways. Do try to hop back to this story soon, even if it is a silly placeholder saying "And Bosco and Rika lived happily ever after in Rika's bed, doing variously unspecified and naughty things. With yarmulkes. The End." By the way, you are my hero. Marry me? wink wink, nudge nudge =P
Chicken Ice Cream 2008-01-07 ch 14,	abuseWhy did it take me this long to review this chapter? Oh well, anyway, i LOVE THIS STORY!
Eiglt 2007-12-30 ch 14,	abuseVery well written and I felt that the pace of the story is... quite literally perfect. It could be a bit confusing at times, however, I suppose that's part of the charm. Great story, I can't wait for the next chapter.
The S.L.Y. Righter 2007-12-30 ch 14,	abuseI'm a bit confused. And a tad disappointed that the story didn't come off as advertised. I was expecting a bit more... Bosco and Baryl. And the twist in the middle took me by surprise; and a bit of disdain. Don't get me wrong. The story is good. And I'm in no way attempting to flame your mind's goal. The story is too muddled and contains a plot that should probably be wrapped up already (Bosco and Baryl either patching things up, or starting anew, etc) and if not addressed will continue to confound the other story that you want to concentrate on. Again, I have no idea where you're going (and by the looks of your last AN it seems you want to go in the Rika x Bosco direction; fine by me) but it just seems to me that you switched midway on what you wanted to do. The earlier chapters reflect that change. And they don't make the story good. Just a bit confusing. I won't be reading this story anymore; mostly because Rika and Bosco don't interest me as much as Bosco and Baryl did. But I do like your works. And have read the others. I really do like your writing. In any case, I just found myself looking more for the interactions of either Bosco and Baryl or Rika and Bosco (both are very interesting, but both together is a bit too much for me!); but the numerous characters that have been introduced and the sudden switch to a character that shows up a few chapters late as the interest for Bosco has made me lose interest in this story. I'm sorry. It is well written though, and I wish you luck in the direction you're going.
mahhhh 2007-12-27 ch 14, anon.	abuseWow, this story really keeps me on edge. It confuses and frustrates me to no end, but that's what makes it so good. Please update! I want Bosco and Rika to finally end up together!
notawritter 2007-12-09 ch 1,	abuseThis story is too confusing for me. And the butler character a real masochist; incredible ! I've read each chapter excepting so much more after the promising begining yet, nothingg... It keeps getting worse and worse. I a sorry but I don't like it anymore

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