This is another excellent poem. I really want to know where you're getting inspired to write such amazing pieces.
Good job.
I love the feeling in it.
This place is false
so there, things must be true.
YEAH!

Beautiful...i am not a conniseur (and not a great speller either) but i like reviews for my stuff..and this is really great, according to me. Beautiful. People say a poem is a little sliver of ourselves..and this is more like an arm or leg. exquisite. or maybe its just late at night. but i really love it