I know this poem wasn't supposed to be humorous but the ending "why didn't I do it sooner" made me laugh. I don't know, maybe i am just that morbid. I hope you don't me reviewing this many of work. sound familiar?
jessica

Wow...that was,well really sad and good. Why not sooner anyway? That jerk deserved it.

powerful... well written, to be exact.

That was a really amazing poem. I like the ending. The last bit is powerful. Great poem- keep up the good work. -Nina