Your point of "Last night i dreamt" was a little to clear.

M I like this, I love the repetition - it really helps to break up the poem. The last few lines are amazing, they send a shiver down my spine, amazing work x weasel within x

Interesting way you wrote this. I like it. ^_^

um...last night
i worked the graveyard shift
it suked
im so tired
(sorry for the assinine thing cant spell either)
anywho liked poem the overall flow was nice kudos!!
live on the edge...

Hi... I enjoyed the poem. Mostly I liked the repition of the "Last night" and the idea behind it. The imagery is delicate and beautiful.
"Give them to me, I said. Give
Me my pictures. Show me.
Last night I dreamt"
this is the only thing I would change. I'm not sure if it was intentionally awkward... but it is... just a little... otherwise it flowed beautifully... very gossamer and dreamlike.. exactly as it should be.

Look i didnt even read this but as you should have read in my profile i dont mind your opinion but i write what i feel and i like the way my writing goes so if u dont like it dont read it aight i have plenty of ppl who do like it though so i would appreciate you not givin me all that brainy crap just dont read em if u dont like em and dont leave any reviews like that again aight p.m.! Leo

Well after reading in the summary that this is the result from yet another school assignment how could I not sneak a peek at it, I mean just where do you go to school, you get some seriously cool assignments where ever it is! Yet another moving and amazing poem you've written *sigh* I've only read two of your pieces and already I love you! When I first read the word "ghost" I thought no not another ghost poem but I'm glad I kept on reading because oherwise I'd have deprived myself of reading such a fantastic poem! I love the description of the ghost and how it moves with the wind... the way you write you can almost picture a ghost just aimlessly floating about! The change from the castle to the clean and clincal setting just speaks volumes and how you manage to capture the desperation and longing for the ghost to get the proof that she exists *sniffle* it's just moving... beautiful on a number of levels! Your so incredbily talented this is definitly one of my fave poems! Well until next time my genius poet... See ya ^_^
P.S... I hope you don't mind but I'm so erm... "borrowing" your phrase! "Whatever floats your boat"