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| caramel blazers 2008-09-29 ch 11,  | abusethis story is good. does that mean that sadie is pregnant? |
| iman1234 2008-09-18 ch 11, | abusekeep going its really good whats going tohappen to sadie |
| dreamwriter33 2008-08-07 ch 3, | abuseloving it! |
| dreamwriter33 2008-08-07 ch 1, | abuseWow. Looks like you haven't updated in a while, but I feel I must take a chance anyway. Love your descriptiveness...set the scene very nicely. |
| toonmili 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abusehey, this is great... my first time reading it. It reminds me of a book I read called the hummingbird tree. and hey, we have the same name... Monique. |
| SIMPLY oDd 2008-02-29 ch 11, | abuseSadie's pregnant?? YAY!! I hope that you will continue this story, I know that it has been a while but this is one of the best story's that I have read on fictionpress. Your language and your style is amazing!! I love the story and I hope you will SOON get the motivation to finish it!! Good Luck!! |
| Xades 2008-02-16 ch 11, | abuseWow! I did not expect that! Please update! |
| Samana Cay 2007-11-27 ch 11, | abuseaw. i do hate a sad ending, but that was just a great - NO, fantastic - story dangnabbit! |
| JusticeWriter 2007-08-04 ch 11, | abuseSo little Sadie is pregnant, eh? Terrible time to get writer's block and not finish this story. Shame on YOU! :( |
| citablebony 2007-07-21 ch 11, | abusei really like to see an update of this story it is very good |
| Scarlet Ibis 24 2006-04-27 ch 6, | abuseThat entire first half made absolutely no sense at all. You totally skipped over what happened with Sadie in the library. I mean, was she raped or just molested? How could you skip an integral scene like that? Skip over Nathaniel's reaction, whatever it was? How did he diffuse the situation? You cut out a huge chunk of the story, and for the life of me, I don't understand why. |
| role 2006-03-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseUDATE like omg UPDATE! |
| lX Carpe Diem Xl 2006-02-19 ch 11, | abuseI am SO happy you decided to continue this. Like I said before I'm absolutely in love with it. Every chapter has me anticipating the next. Nathaniel and Sadie are such great characters and I can't even hate Anna. And now this little cliffhanger at the end...is so very cruel! I'm going to go bonkers waiting to see how Nathaniel reacts to her condition... |
| Kiki 2006-01-15 ch 11, anon. | abuseO...is Sadie with ...Nate's child? Hm...Poor Sadie, poor Nate. ANd I dislike Anna. She is a witch, although I can understand from her viewpoint that husband should be loyal... but there's just he fact that her 'husband' doesn't love her. ;) He loves Saide. Dun dun dun... *drumroll* |
| Margot Tenenbaum 2006-01-15 ch 11, | abuse...OMG!IS SADIE PREGNANT?DEAR LORD, PLEASE UPDATE SOON.haha. on another note, I'm so glad that you decided to continue this. i almost couldn't believe it when i saw the author alert in my mailbox!overall, I think the only thing you need to watch out for is typos and stuff.other than that, your word choice is excellent and it really reflects the emotions of all the characters! |