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| BecomingMyself 2004-04-12 ch 1,   | Hm, so sad to come to the fourth stanza and to see how to bid goodbye? "You'll always be beautiful in my eyes": somehow I don't get it, don't know where the title is coming back in the works itself... ...yet, I do think I know what you are expressing within the whole poem: Maturing, changing, losing etc., everything that matters to life for real, very sad message to end with! After one year, it is good to see you writing again. |