Really like the rhyming and structure. Shame it's so short though! Good stuff!

Eep. Shame on me for not reading some of your more recent stuff. Big shame, missing wonderful works like this. Great rhyme scheme, with the rhymes falling throughout the stanza and carrying into the next. Wonderful vocabulary, delicate but understandable... most beautiful words require a dictionary or a very large vocabulary from the reader :) Short, but powerful of course.

I really like this poem.
It's very beautiful.
Simple and really deep.
As my mythology teacher Mr. Smith would say, "That's gotta ** load of good stuff inside."
Seriously, this poem took my breath away.
I was going to say that I liked the last stanza, but that would be a lie. I like the whole ** thing. You rock, socks and blocks of pox ridden flocks of hawks. YEAH! (HOW'S THAT FOR RHYMING?)
I love this poem.
Very much.
: D