Reviews for Our Last Day Together

Get Lucky 101 2004-07-27 ch 1,	aw, you can't say that it sucked,it's to good for that! you write a lot better than nina ^^ , lol I was burtally forced to proof read her essay for class and it almost killed me (lol j/k) , but are you going to continue it? you can't just leave it off like that =( well any ways g2g love yah always happy-go-luk aka~ mo ^^
Aya and Naru 2004-06-06 ch 1,	Aya: I love this story! So full of anger! ~is hyper due to caffiened soda~ me love! Naru: God...you're a pest who you get hyper...can't you asct normal in reviews? Anyways, nice story. I liked the mermaids...fish...
Lunar Wulf Gemini 2004-04-13 ch 1,	Sad but well written
Kazumi Kairi or Kairi-chan 2004-04-13 ch 1,	It's really interesting... and yet the ending was so sad... I wonder is the little girl wasn't a human or the mermaidswere making it up? Please continue it! ^^ Kazumi Kairi or Kairi-chan
La'Ruelia 2004-04-12 ch 1,	It was sad in the end...I hope you contine this story!
luhkiebunnie 2004-04-12 ch 1,	whoa... this is really interesting! What do the mermaids want with her? please continue!!