You should break the story up so that it can be read more easily. It doesn't seem like much, but spacing in your story can determine whether or not it's read. If this story had been any longer than this I wouldn't have read it when I saw the big blob of text.

short, sweet, and without any complicated twists. ^^ sometimes it's nice to read things that don't have so many twists, turns, and building tension. the excitement's fun, but the cliffhangers SUCK. lol. nice story. =)

I liked this story. It was cute.

Wonderful tale.

I really really did enjoy this fic. For a standalone, it was written excellently. Update soon (you know what I am talking about)!