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Reviews For: Habanero Pepper Mints - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

AlmostFamous12
2006-10-21
ch 1,
abusehahahahaha. I love it. Definately love it.
WyrdWolf
2006-04-27
ch 1,
abuseHilarious. Esp. the part with the mace! Loved it.

-=WyrdWolf=-

2005-07-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseLOL LOL LOL! nice! spraying you with mace lol where did you come up with that? it hasnt happened to you has it? o.O' anyway great =P
K. Francesco
2005-05-18
ch 1,
abuseHm, not too sureif I enjoyed this. It did give me a few snickers, though. Ah well, can't win them all. But wait. . .I think I am out of stories. Damn you. Only not, I suppose. . .a threat of damnation would be much better. Yeah, I have the power of damnation. Want to argue? You can't prove anything. The fact that I can't either is absolutely irrelevent.

See, the withdrawal is beginning. Still, though, I really do hope that you get access and such to a computer soon. Now I can't even have a hope that there's more to read. I should have rationed it. . .I knew I should have. . .

Kat
Ria Mala
2004-06-30
ch 1,
abuseHah, "you should see the surgeon general's warning...". Nice stuff. For an egotistical bastard, you are pretty funny. I'll be off now to read more of your work.
Dirty Wallpaper
2004-06-08
ch 1,
abusei loved this for numerous reasons...
1. i ** HATE you mrs baker YOU STUPID GOSSIP BREATHING BIATCH. god i hate that woman, so the fact that you damned a "mrs baker" made me achieve that glow which is said to come only after sex.
2. i really loved the commercial. a C? what the hell? damn fools. especially the burning, i *adored* the burning.
3. i loved this because i was still in a good mood from reading that monkey piece and your newly added flames. im so glad someone has finally addressed the absolute REDUNDANCY of monkeys - enjoyed the spin on it also. ill review it later, purely because i ** off zone alarm.
good work, kudos~!
Remix S.O.S
2004-05-22
ch 1,
abusegreat realy funny loved it
PTTProcrastinator
2004-05-17
ch 1,
abuseThis is only the script. Although I have no idea what you do in your TV Production class, in the one I took a few years back a project included video footage. I can only assume it was the same for you, otherwise the class would be called "Script Writing."
The script seems like something anyone has spouted out in a social situation. I personally have spoken of ideas for mock Mentos commercials. This script is nothing special and displays a whit that is best not to pollute the world any further than it already is.
You got an "A-" on this. An "A" is an "A" and it's a perfectly justified grade. Either way, I'd say you have some issues that need to be settled.
Also, don't try to act older than you actually are.
Love and Shadow
2004-05-17
ch 1,
abuseTHIS IS HILARIOUS!
Infamous Writer
2004-05-16
ch 1,
abuseThis is definitely A+ work, not A-! It was pretty funny! You're good at this...
OldJoe
2004-05-09
ch 1,
abusegiggleing. You horribly mangled this word. It had no hope. That is a crime. Vicious word-slaughter.(okay,fine, all you did was put an e where it shouldn't be). Otherwise, A+ squared, plus the prduct of four puzzled aardvarks.
Red Masque
2004-05-08
ch 1,
abuseHehehe very nice. ::sighs:: I wish i still had my talkshow up. I would point you to it and guffaw at my own sorry humor while others (i.e. you) roll their eyes at how... moronic it was. ::sigh:: but it made me so happy...
whoo enough mindless babbling... about me. now for mindless babbling about you (funfun). nerdy kids in immense pain, carried off by oddly attracted cheerleaders. could it get any better? i don't think so.
mwahaha
rm
Jet-sama
2004-05-05
ch 1,
abuseThat was freaking hilarious. That would be really funny if someone was actually stupid enough to make those. You should do more of these parody commercials.
A Brother Scorned
2004-05-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseOkay, first of all the habanero pepper can destory tastebuds so I highly doubt that anyone would have enough crack for brains to make a mint out of them. Second, to quench the thirst of the habanero pepper, it takes milk or some other viscious substance to soothe it, NOT Mountain Dew! I would continue, but it'd just be a waste of words...like this sad parody for a story was! By the way, no refunds without a reciept.
JP Mangan
2004-04-24
ch 1,
abuseit was strange, and PS- I didn't rite that. Sum1 probably hacked on to my user name and put it on or something but i didnt do it. Ur story was a little...different, and try to have a little more characters.
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