It's amazing how you use fairy tale creatures to create a brutal and honest piece. The last line is just so confident and leaves the reader with a lot...

Wow, that's rather disturbing. I've always opposed sexual abuse, I think it's horrid and wrong. (But, then again, who wouldn't?) I'm kind of intrigued by the flow and description you have in this certain poem. In your words, you use a fairy to describe this abuse and such. A rather spiffy effect, I must say.

Great work! But, I can't help feel sorry for the fairy. =( Poor fairy!

Wow - really disturbing. But written very well.

WOW! I love it!

Owch, understood completely, although in my dad's eyes i'm not much of an achievement, but apparently i should be. Very very good. Keep it up
S.O.S x

sickly good. very well-written. great rhyming and rhythm. all your words fit. this was so disturbingly dirty and great. i loved this.

wow o my dear god wow! im nearly cryin! its beautiful and o so sad!! ur style of writing is amazing! lov ya xx p.s. cud u check out sum of my stuff? sory if its crappy!

Whoa, just whoa. This poem is amazing. The emotion and imagery is so intense. This is going on my favorites.
*lime-girl*

This was mildly disturbing and rather unsettling, yet I enjoyed it quite a bit. I had to read it twice before I finally figured it out, which just proves that I'm as slow as they say.
Very well done, kudos to you!

I love this! Great imagery, and beautifully disturbing. Awesome writing, B.

Macabre, peverse, and beautifully unsettling, I love it. Generally I don't prefer a specifically intended rhyme scheme, but you manipulate it well. You drain me.

whoa. that was awesome! i'm putting it on my faves. i absolutely love your imagery, great poem!

Wow.
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*is stunned silent*
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Incredibly intense imagery. The first line hits the reader hard. And the rest, is consistent in hitting the reader harder and harder.
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I feel black and blue.
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Fabulous diction. It stabs me to my core.
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Powerful and Intense.
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Beautiful Pounding Work! Keep it up because you're on fire!

i never read this before, but it's amazing, i agree with john about feeling emotionally drained after stuff like this, a fantasic silce of demented imagery.
Kenzie

woah... Woah... WOAH... *in awe* How do you DO THAT? =O I loved this... I am going to go read some more of your stuff... Wow...