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i-see-faeries 2007-03-11 . chapter 2
Interesting. Really interesting. This is easy to understand and exciting. The characters seem developed enough to not be superficial. I love it. Update soon.
DMLpacker 2006-08-18 . chapter 2
I like this story. I hope you update even though it's been 2 years...
slinkytool34629 2006-07-14 . chapter 2
omg squee! i love this story!! you must update NOW!
Beth 2006-06-14 . chapter 2
Hiya. You write amazingly well - I love your descriptions. They're very...well, descriptive. They let the readers feel the character's emotions, and not many people pull that off!

Oh, and I just wanted to say, just in case you didn't know, Mad World was done by Tears For Fears back in the early 1980s, long before Gary Jules did it. I prefer the original version, but like Gary Jules', too.
Ida 2006-05-08 . chapter 1
Please, dear author, but it looks like I have no other means to contact you. If you can, please, answer me.
Obake-chan13 2005-07-03 . chapter 2
whee! update update update!
Widom 2005-04-09 . chapter 2
My this story is angsty. Still, I like it...I don't tend to write stories quite like this, so this surprises me. Ah, oh well...hope you continue and update quickly.
Widom 2005-04-09 . chapter 1
Well, you're certainly an interesting one. The Dark One killed so he could be with his demon, yes? Shame on him...but it was kind of romantic, in a way. Good summary too...
Wolfwitch 2005-04-06 . chapter 2
It's nice to know that someone shares my obsession with those kinds of names. This is very interesting. I like the demon bound to an angel thing.
subtleline 2004-08-17 . chapter 2
This was really gripping. I would REALLY like to see where you take it from here so keep it coming. I mean there's the whole relationship to establish and I'm sure Rain won't go along so easily. It should b interesting so update SOON!
Daft Fear 2004-04-26 . chapter 2
Oh Kian is so cool! Those stupid thugs! YOU DON'T RIP OFF AN ANGEL'S WINGS! aw I was so sad when he took them of! *huggles him* Rain is cool^^ Very very very cool! He will love Kian yes he will! lol :)
Weeping-Tenshi 2004-04-25 . chapter 2
That's cool! this is like one of your best stories! keep writeing! ^_^
ola 2004-04-25 . chapter 2
whoohho! so glad you updated!! i love this story, even though it;s still the begining. i do hope there will be a LOT more. (there will, right? pelase make it really long!)
this story has me hooked like a helpless little fish. please please update as soon as you can!
this definitley deserves a place in the fav. story list! yay! *grins*
Amilie 2004-04-24 . chapter 2
Well gosh, I'm glad to find other great story. (I love Klutz btw). I really like the premise of this story, and so far the characters seem to really work off one another well. Hope you keep it going!
Dlyope 2004-04-24 . chapter 2
Aw...how sweet! Confusing but still. I *love* Cerberus! So cute XD ::dies::
Ahem. Anyways, love Rain. He's a temperamental one, hm... Bring on some slash. Please. : )
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