Another original masterpiece by Tigress Moon... I've thought about things like this before, but relating chemistry to real life. Came up with some weird theory that limewater has a crush on Carbon dioxide and so turns milky in its presence... (:s)

Agree with everything flamewing said- 'tis quite cool the way you alternate sentences with less structured words, but you're supposed to use the geometric mean with a title like that!

Oh... wow. *holds head* It's supposed to be a weekend... I'm not supposed to learn anything new! *falls over*
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Anywho- I can't necessarily say groovy since I didn't actually understand it, but it was... nifty!
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Regina O.B.

That's really cool! I love how you put all the definitions into real life things. It's really unique and I like it a lot. I like it even though I'm dumb, and not in Geometry. Awesome!

I love this. Just the way it sounds - every other stanza all ordered and sentence-y and proselike, and it's so structured and final it's like you're just sitting there thoroughly studying for a test. Then there's the little sideways thoughts throughout, showing what you'd really rather be thinking of...I like.
Except you never brought up geometric means. x/y=y/z...yurss. I'm showing my geekness...
Lovely.

Wow. All I can say. I love it- the whole philosophical-ness of it. And the last part, wow! So much symbolism and all that...is being faved.