Wonderfully done. I like the way this can be read on different levels, either referring to nature, or else including a spiritual/ symbolic dimension, waves of doubt/ life's turmoil blurring the view of eternity or something like that. There is so much in those few words.

YEAH! YOU POSTED THIS ONE TOO! very good. its kind of mind-boggling, thinking about infinity, but you capture it well. or, as well as one can capture infinity.

... Need I say what an amazing picture you draw with this? Beautiful sussie...

You seems to be expressing some type of loss of hope or something. That's just what I got from it. Very beautiful, keep writing. -LSL

Mae Govannen.
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Love the bit where "eternity floats away"
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Namarie.