thanks for the review ^_^
i dont know why but this poem ** me off. its good in that its a poem nd the rythm and all that is great but i dont know what it was that agitated me about it. ne ways
~Nat

this is heart wrenching and touching and beautiful. i love the flow of words! great job!

i love it another great on keep up the great work i am glad authors like you exsist

Hello, my friend. Thanx for reviewing my stuff, and 'cause you did, I decided to look at your stuff, and I don't regret it one bit. I really like this, what looks to be, a song, and if I am correct, I would die to hear the music and the way it is sung! Great JOB!

Ah, my dear, the summary, do I sense a hint of plagiarism? Mwahahahahah. I'm kidding. Ugh, I'm bored, I have two new story ideas and this damn writer's block won't go away! Its been lasting me like three months now. I'm cursed. Doomed. And failing two classes at school. But this is a review - or at least its supposed to be! Your works are improving even more - if thats possible. Did I ever tell you that you have the best metaphors? And the title 'A Legacy of Pain' just grabs you. Excellently done. I'm off to review your other two pieces!

hey hey!
i luv this piece!! it's very powerful in an 'is-anyone-out-there-listening-to-me-at-all' way. 'My echoes are the soundtrack of/New suicides that taint the walls' - that line realli caught me for some reason.. x-cellent job! keep writing! (n' r&r my stuff if u get a chance ;))
~KS

Well-written. I like the fact you used your own personal pain, I suppose and presume. Capturing...