just a note: i'm a guy . . . yeah . . . and this is still touching . . . just thought you should know . . . keep writing, keep smiling, keep on surviving.

...*hugs*...
amazing poem, btw...can really feel the emotion in it, even if it's insanely depressing...

...Wow...very powerful...and this is why I said take a break...

This is beautiful and very well done. I love its graphic, vivid intensity, especially in that incredible line "these eyes bleed lucid sorrow". Also, this is something almost everyone can relate to. Really good.