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| Burning Moon 2004-04-13 ch 1,  | abusejust a note: i'm a guy . . . yeah . . . and this is still touching . . . just thought you should know . . . keep writing, keep smiling, keep on surviving. |
| Noodlebug 2004-04-13 ch 1, anon. | abuse...*hugs*... amazing poem, btw...can really feel the emotion in it, even if it's insanely depressing... |
| Passage 2004-04-13 ch 1, | abuse...Wow...very powerful...and this is why I said take a break... |
| Eirien 2004-04-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful and very well done. I love its graphic, vivid intensity, especially in that incredible line "these eyes bleed lucid sorrow". Also, this is something almost everyone can relate to. Really good. |