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| Misterious 2005-08-25 ch 1,   | This is a cute story so far and I would like to read more. |
| Loriency 2005-08-22 ch 1, | my gosh, you almost described my family and mom perfectly! I swear. I come from a family of ten kids, secondyoungest, I am, and my mom homeschooled and breast-fed all of us. She is, undoubtedly, the smartest woman that I know. Literally, our family is known throughout the state. We're brought up exactly like these people too. My mom...dude, you have literally described my family to a T. It's so scary! Lol. Cya |
| Marikalay Aedelos 2005-05-05 ch 1, | That was lovely. I would suggest that you work your way through "The boys were outnumbered..." Your calculations do seem to be the tinniest bit off. P.S. If I have, in my tactless manner, given offense, I am sorry. |
| Nanners 2004-11-03 ch 1, | I love this. It made me laugh. And it's true, the thing Fluffy said, about the time-out chair, and about how mothers should be mean when they have to. - Good work! |
| Faerie Corpse 2004-08-17 ch 1, | This was different and I got a little confused at times, but not too bad. |
| Miss W D Halliwell 2004-05-07 ch 1, | That was a really cute story! WD |
| Lives Backstage 2004-04-14 ch 1, | i can so see fluffy saying how he doesn't talk back to mom. my dad took me shopping for my seventeenth birthday. he went into hot topic with me for my birthday. he was wearing his crisp pinstripe suit and burberry trench coat. as i was picking out some shirts and pajamas, he walked around looking at all the workers in the store with their piercings and tattoos. he couldn't have been happier to leave. but hey, don't knock thongs-i hate pantylines and if thongs get rid of them then hell, ill buy fifty, ok maybe only ten because im nearly broke. but i love the motherness of mrs. sharon. i can so see the family in my head with marie running around on peoples feet and ruling the home. splendid job. |
| Gilded Muse 2004-04-12 ch 1, | That was cute. Cute in a good sense, too. Just a fun little story. I really liked it, anyway. Especially the beginning, although the part at the end about the Hot Topic and the motherliness of Mrs. Sharon was good as well. And little Fluffy's comment about the dad was so adorable! A very cute story. |