I don't know why you were so embarrassed by this story. I actually liked it and usually I'm hard to please. I've read your trilogy (which I love by the way, sorry I haven't reviewed -> is lazy) and was checking out your page when I saw the announcement that you were taking it down and decided to read it before it was gone. I didn't realize until I finished the last chapter that it wasn't completed. Gah! You evil being. >_< Oh well, I enjoyed what I read, now I'm off to bed. I'll try reviewing on your other stories once in a while.

This really isn't that bad you know :P
Compared to my early stuff, it's downright awesome.
I'm sad that we'll never find out if Jessie actually tells Christian, but I know that when the muse goes, it's gone. And I guess you have had nothing for this story since '05.
TBH I do prefer your current stuff though.

Aww don't remove it! You should update! Its a great story that needs a great ending! ^^

Only five chapters? I wish I had noticed this hadn't been updated in four years BEFORE I read the whole thing and got addicted. Now that's just cruel. Any chance of you resuming this? Please say yes. PLEASE!

The dynamics of their relationship are so good, and the characters are great! The premise might be cliche but you do it so well it hardly seems so! It's like a breath of fresh air. I like Jessie so much. Plus it seems like Christian was just about to find out about him. I need to know what happens. Please continue!

oh wow, I love how you aren't rushing through with the plot. And the way you write emotions is pretty neat too.
=]
.Jess.

Damn when is Christian gonna realize that Jessie is actually a guy?

please please please update this story soon...

puhlease? its awesome, and yeah, jessie cracks me up.

please? *begs* i'll give you a cookie. :D

aww this story is so cute... i think u should rite more!!

Gah! It's so good and you haven't updated in THREE AND A HALF FREAKIN' YEARS! -is depressed-

please, save what's left of my sanity, UPDATE!

~Charlie

This is possibly the most awkward situation i can think of. And i really cannot wait to see how you fix it.

I noticed you haven't updated this story un a long while, but I hope one day you can do so. I really liked reading it. The plot might not have been unique, but I felt the characters were very much so. This is really good.

It's been ages! >o< Please update again! This storyline is interesting! Please? *puppy dog eyes*

ooh i love your story, and for some reason i keep thinking that Christian knows that Jessie is a boy, and that Jessie is just overreacting...but of course, i'm probably wrong lol
update soon!
~Mia

You haven't updated for nearly a year and half.
Please don't tell me that your hate period of this story has lasted this long!
Because it's good, and I want to read more!

I don't CARE whether you like this story or NOT... because everyone else seems to like it !! And, we demand for an UPDATE !! :P

Good Lord, I just scared the wits out of me ;)... but, seriously, you should consider finishing what you began because every single reader would want to now what will happen to them in the end... PLEASE UPDATE - chocolate ice cream if you do :)