oh thats beaitful. did it really take you 5 years to write this? its really beaitful.

Only five years? Crap man, that's TALENT! That would have taken me a couple lifetimes! Anyway, great poem, keep it up.

Wow. That was cool.

wow

Thats good. I like your work. Keep it up!
p.s. you can read mine if you want to:)

5 words: short, sweet, to the point.

*whistles* wow. that was good. *whining: how come I can't write that well? huh? huh?
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5 years? wow, you must have been thinking about this poem for a while. like i said, it's awesome.

It took you five years? That's deep, man. Crazy stuff.

I can relate, but I bet you don't think I can. I just hope you aren't actually going to hurt yourself in anyway. It's not worth it. You're talented and this poem really shows that. It's beautiful...

A very touching poem. I think a lot of people out there will regocnise the message you are sending and relate to it. :)

This was really good! It would be cool if you made this into a longer poem as well, with this bit as the last verse. Keep up the good work! :)