I like this one. The lining is more conventional than in some of your work, and I think it works in this case. I like some of the metaphors and detailing. I particularly like 'I offered myself the sunset.' Very nice. Yours in writing,pointythings

This was one of the last pieces that you wrote before graduating. I understand it knowing that that is what its contents are about. But I do have to say, that your work got 100% better after this point.D.

*claps* Yay! Good poem! I enjoyed reading it!