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insert name here 2004-04-13 . chapter 1
i think we all need to look inside of ourselves to see the young and innocent child that always lies within, the world would be a much happier place if we could all recognise that yeah we may hide behind a cold mask of unfeeling, but inside we're just small children wanting to be loved and to be young and unafraid again... nice poem, very well written...
~brendz~
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