This is really good! Keep up the awesome work! This is awesome! ...Mischevious green eyes and black hair? ...I've got a really hot picture of him in my mind! XD

This was really good, if not a bit short. I like it. What more can I say?

(I live in Maryland!)

funky, i like it. Bravo on the originality, luv the ending. great narration ^-^ even without dialogue it made an interesting read. keep on writing!

That was very well written. You have a beautiful way of crafting your sentences. I hope this is based on a true story!