 SaraLizabeth 2004-07-30 . chapter 1*is in tears* that's how i feel...my life's messed up now, and i'm trying to be strong, ya know? but i wish i had someone to run to when i cried who'd hold me and tell me it's okay...*is rambling now* mkay well I L-O-V-E this poem. Great writing. Keep it up! |
 rogue mystique 2004-06-12 . chapter 1oh that touched me so deep, im crying now because i cant find that person either... cying, falling, breaking, and no one to hug and say its okay, inspiration! oh thankies! i love this poem definetily a fave. |
 Summerkins 2004-04-23 . chapter 1*siffs* damn it carrie you need to stop writing these sad poems...gr they make ME sad! lol |
 Lan Jian 2004-04-22 . chapter 1wow, great poem, don't we all want someone lyk that?? nicely written!! |
 Master Mind4 2004-04-21 . chapter 1(sniffle, sniffle) Wow, this is definately an awesome poem. I wish there was someone out there for everyone. But back to the point, this is a magnificently and perfectly written poem. I must say, I was quite overwhelmed with emotion and envy after reading this superb piece of poetry. Just... out-of-this-world! |
 A Chroi 2004-04-14 . chapter 1Lovely and lyrical. This hits close to home. |
 Chase's Aces 2004-04-13 . chapter 1That is some good stuff right there. I would just like to say this if this poem was written about the author...just keep looking, he's out there somewhere. |
 born blue 2004-04-13 . chapter 1beautiful... wow |