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| Kirona of the skies 2004-07-25 ch 1,  | abuseNice job! I REALLY like this one. It flows well, the emotion in it is really strong...it's all great! I like it very much!! ^__~ |
| Prince of Mirkwood 2004-04-28 ch 1, | abusei think everyone feels lost at some point... =) |
| Dark Lalage 2004-04-28 ch 1, | abusethats very cool and kind of different i like it. thanx for reviewing my poem even though it was a song! but thanx newayz! |
| mizu no kokoro 2004-04-27 ch 1, | abusesigh... know the feeling, it reli sucks doesn't it? well, awesome poem amyways^^ keep writing! |
| Feng, the Tears of a Phoeni... 2004-04-14 ch 1, | abuseAh the joys of studying for exams! ^_~ I kinda know how you feel, but on smaller scale cos I'm only 13. I love the line "The threads unravel" I'm not even sure why I just like it a lot! ^^ May have some work up myself soon... maybe! ^^ |
| Matthew James Current 2004-04-13 ch 1, | abuseA good poem. I thought it was a nice read myself. Me, I would have made it longer. But that doesn't mean you should or that it's bad, it's just because I write really long flipping things ^_^*. In any case, I hope that you feel less lost in the days to come. Take care now. |