Nice job! I REALLY like this one. It flows well, the emotion in it is really strong...it's all great! I like it very much!! ^__~

i think everyone feels lost at some point... =)

thats very cool and kind of different i like it. thanx for reviewing my poem even though it was a song! but thanx newayz!

sigh... know the feeling, it reli sucks doesn't it? well, awesome poem amyways^^ keep writing!

Ah the joys of studying for exams! ^_~ I kinda know how you feel, but on smaller scale cos I'm only 13. I love the line "The threads unravel" I'm not even sure why I just like it a lot! ^^ May have some work up myself soon... maybe! ^^

A good poem. I thought it was a nice read myself. Me, I would have made it longer. But that doesn't mean you should or that it's bad, it's just because I write really long flipping things ^_^*. In any case, I hope that you feel less lost in the days to come. Take care now.