I'm wide-eyed. I completely back your suggestion for an anger category. Anyway though- wow, you're talented. All I can say.

Better than what I just read...but not close to compare to some of my favorites. This one you put more of yourself into the work, but still...it's almost too formal and structured. Gotta let loose Bro. *

very well done! (oh im so varrying my use of words now :P see i have a vocabulary!)

such a raw poem, i really like it, and loved the ending. keep up the good work!

Very nice. I can't get over how your poetry speaks to me.

I think you know what I'm going to say, but I'll say it anyways...lol...great job on this one! I don't think you need to change it at all - it's great as is. *applauds*

Your poems just keep getting better! This is a good one. I like the ending. You really do have talent. Keep it up!

first of all - i love the first line. it draws me into the poem, wanting me to read more. Secondly, I think the rhyming goes very well because its pounding, just like anger. Finally, the ending was clever. I love the last line. Overall, very good job. *claps*

This is a very insightful poem! Keep up the good work, my friend and keep writing! I will check back for more soon, see ya later! I like the repetition at the end of it...very nice.

Hey, great poem. Nice job
-Anne

This is REALLY good. I'm adding it to my favs.