A little perverted but then again I'm the one who wrote "Satan's Concubine" It's a great poem in my opinion, keep up with this (I liked it better than the environmental poem because it's a lot more emotional and heartfelt)
~Nymph

Great writing keep it up.
~Nina~

Good. I like the fact that you make it apparent that this is imagination and not something real and past.
"I WANT YOU TO CARESS MY SKIN,
AS YOU WOULD CARESS A KITTEN,"
--this is corny to me, sorry, it looks like you were really trying hard to fit the ryhme, try to find something else... smitten, bitten, etc.
other than that I like the flow you've got going on here. Just as a side not for future reference stay away from using 'and' at the being of a line such as
"AND LOOK AT ME IN ADMIRATION,"
this weakens what is being said and can detract from its meaning and power. BUt neways, good job! I liked it. Good read.

very nice writing scheme, good work! ^.^
~*~SparklingRose~*~