Sweet. This is an awesome peice of work. Great job!

This is really good. I love all of your poems. I can really relate to what most of them are saying. Keep up the good work.

Um... "ek" would be a useful word here. Like creepy dark... painful... desolate... damn good! You really put the picture and feelings for this in very stark perspective- no doubt about it- this is a very sharp piece of work! Keep writing!