I had this poem on my favorites list before you removed the ending, and I think I liked it better that way, mostly because the sarcasm was much more evident, and I just found it funny. Without the way you had ended it, the sarcasm is too hard to detect. I still love this poem, but I liked it better before.

I am honestly laughing out loud. That rarely happens. This is funny in way that makes you go "what?" if you weren't paying attention. Very good.

great job!! i really liked this.. sarcasm is awesome and you've written your poem very well!

I really enjoyed this. Nicely written. Good work!

~Always, Saeo

*giggle*
Hey, I know this story! I read it in my German class just like you, but the difference is that I live in Germany. It was printed in our schoolbook and I felt that we totally overinterpreted it.
It's just about a girl who wants to be a rebel, I'd say.
Funny work, anyway.

I like. Sometimes I think we read too deeply into meaningless stories too... oh well, very good.

Hm...I like this. I know what...er...I guess I sorta get the idea. I guess I don't know what I'm talking about. Dammit. You made me think, dude. Hmm...I like you.

*snickers quietly* Very nice.

Whoa...sweet...It was cool how the simple story can be more...

That's really funny, I read that story last year in my German class. The analysis you describe is definitely a stretch. Excellent poem by the way.

I loved the way you started off simply, got very detailed, examining each little idea, but somehow ended up in the same place you started at. Very nice work.

I really liked this. I get the same thing at school; made to over analyze and pick apart things that are really simple.
I so loved the blunt ending to your poem. Great work.