Oh this is fantastic! I loved it!

BTW, can you have a look at my story?

sounds delicious. haha

nice! this is a really intresting idea for a poem! i dont think ive ever seen anything quitelike this before! thanks for the reviews. always fun:D thse formatting for this is a little confusing, itshard to identify the rhymes scheme, mabey put each line on a seprate line? then a space between that and the next paragraph? but, its SO bloody cool! nice, NICE job!
Birdy

this is so creative! i like the proportions you used for the ingredients, it's very true. i didn't see heartbreak in there though, and i don't think anyone can go through life without it. *adds story to Favorites*
please r/r my poems

I like it a lot.