Hey, I like this one-shot thing. I can see why it got accepted. Congratulations on that, by the way.
I like well-written short-shorts. There's a writing competition every year that gives a new sentence for the beginning of a 250 word short shot. I never enter, but I always use the sentence to write something odd.

pretty good, short n sweet

Wow. You are very good at imagery. This fic was very beautiful, and dramatic. Will I see you at the Contra? JoAnna tells me you might have a new name. It shall be interesting.
-SASHA