More rhyme might make it better u never know, but i guess it can be frustrating huh? poor cliff... lol

hm... sounds a bit like what you do...0)

I TOTALLY UNDERSTAND! One of my best friends takes advantage of my smarts and cheats off my constantly...nobody understands the constange raging anger I feel towards her all the time...but u do! AHH! I hate it! Im here for ya! lol
great job with your thought poem and keep writing!