Wow this one is also great! Keep it up!

nice story, it's good... I like your
way of writing out the story
By the way, thank you for the review for my story THANK YOU!

Interesting so far!
I hope you translate
the japanese, cause i
want to know what it means!
Anyway Update soon!

I really enjoyed the beginning part! It was so MYSTERIOUS, you know?
But...maybe you should post some english translations for the japanese.
Also, I'm just starting my own manga, so, if you have time, do you think you could check it out?