OMG, this is a great start for the chapter! keep on writing!

it's a great story you should keep writeing also you should try and read my own storys too.

I have to say, this one is much better than your other stories. However, old flaws return to haunt you. Remember to check your sentences -- read them through and see if they flow. Get more description into the setting... make it as wordy as possible, so that we know the exact shade of the moss and rock, just as long as we can see where the scene is taking place as though it were happening around us and not on a computer screen! ^^
The whole 'random-people-have-ambushed-me' seems to be a popular motif with you. Just thought I'd note that.
Anyway. Much better, still has a few flaws which need fixin', but not too too bad.

Its good. I like how the link is between the dragon and her. Just a few suggestions. You might want to describe things better. I want to picture the whole scene. Also, its a bit confusing. Try to explain a bit more about their situation. And try for longer chapters. Its a good idea, just develop it more. Write more soon!

Very interesting plot line. I can't wait to read more of this. Oh, and also, like the person before me said, Eragon is a GREAT book. It might help you to characterize the dragons. Can't wait to read more. Update soon.

good storey li like the begining
can't wait to read the first chapter
keep writing

Well A good start. Just want to know just a little more about your characters. Thus, if you have chance read Eragorn by Christopher Paolini,for it's a great story. Meanwhile, this story has a lot of potential and I think you could fulfill that. Good Luck from here!