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| axica 2004-05-12 ch 1,   | lovely. dilute our happiness indeed. I like how you stick meanings in between the lines, it makes rereading it so much fun. the second last line seemed a little awkward because of how the l i e is paced, but that might just be a personal preference of mine. I really do love this new experimental style of yours because you change the way you phrase things a little. It is a different way of relaying the message, and it is soft, but stunning. |
| All Midnight Eyes 2004-04-15 ch 1, | Oh, love this. I LOVE the lines "it is silence that sleeps/ between our bodies". Gorgeous. Reminds me of Margaret Atwood's "Variations on the Word Sleep". ~Midnight Eyes~ |
| AntiPleasure 2004-04-14 ch 1, | Wow!! ^_^ all of your poems are formatted so nicely, the shape of it always looks very nice with your wide range of vocabulary. Well done. Jenna xx |
| breakdown in the waiting ro... 2004-04-14 ch 1, | I love this format. Again, speechless. You always give me such lovely reviews and I feel inadequate reviewing your work. Such beautiful lines. It's pleadingly perfect. By the way- is your email fixed yet? -Jessica |