lovely.
dilute our happiness indeed.
I like how you stick meanings in between the lines, it makes rereading it so much fun.
the second last line seemed a little awkward because of how the l i e is paced, but that might just be a personal preference of mine.
I really do love this new experimental style of yours because you change the way you phrase things a little. It is a different way of relaying the message, and it is soft, but stunning.

Oh, love this. I LOVE the lines "it is silence that sleeps/ between our bodies". Gorgeous. Reminds me of Margaret Atwood's "Variations on the Word Sleep".
~Midnight Eyes~

Wow!! ^_^ all of your poems are formatted so nicely, the shape of it always looks very nice with your wide range of vocabulary. Well done.
Jenna xx

I love this format. Again, speechless. You always give me such lovely reviews and I feel inadequate reviewing your work. Such beautiful lines. It's pleadingly perfect.
By the way- is your email fixed yet?
-Jessica