 i am pookie 2006-02-28 . chapter 1Beautiful. I loved it immensely!
'We wandered through that awful placeWhere evil shaped the trees.'
I loved that line, the imagery was outstanding! But this poem and pushed together, read all at once, it's like reading a mini-novelette fantasy story! I hung on each word until the very end, which is strangely fitting for the entire poem.
Ugh! Lovely job, wonderful! |