Sweet and perfect

this is a very good poem with great imagery which helps me visualise the fireflies seeing that i've never actually seen fireflies before...!

hmm...not bad though I think there is something...overly innocent...like it seems a young chilod wrote it and it doesnt quite feel..I dont know but I didnt like it as much as the others...

Thankyou so much for reveiwing my poems. This one is really good, the first time I saw fireflies I thought they were faery lights, LOL. Keep it up!

This was delightful. Very poetic in every sense.

“What magic is this?!”
well..the magic of this poem is great!
it's YOUR magic!
nice poem!
^-^ HaPPy

very nice, pretty. I liked how you described the fireflies.
"I watch them titter
In such a melodious way
They shiver together
As they gently sway"
thanks for the review ^^

"Just a quiet, beautiful
Sight. "

I noticed the flies a few nights ago, buzzing around in the dark, and I thought I was seeing something.
It flows and, best of all, it's cute.
Forgive me, I'm drugged up on Nyquil again, saw you posted, and I find my fingers cannot express how this makes me feel; maybe tired and wanting to fall asleep on a pile of leaves. I would, but mommy's allergic to all the bugs out there and I'd just bring them in.
This makes feel so at ease, thanks, that's what I needed.

:) That's pretty. I like the way it flows, and the imagry you used. I wrote a poem about fireflies, too, .. 'cept it's shorter (by a lot) and more juvenile. I really like this poem. ^_^
~TBH (unincorporated)