it has nice flow

Oh! This is extraordinary! I love it! =) I'm adding it to my favorites. Write on!

~PDW

Losing someone you care for is more painful than getting shot. Great work.

Amazing poem with lots of emotion. Nicely written.

*lime-girl*

very nice...i have to say the whole thing is just amazing...i love it...couldn't say this better myself even if i tried...well done...just amazing. lots of love ~AllyCred~

I dont think the last line really fits. I dont know maybe its just me, but i loved the rest. Keep it up.*Lady Solitaire*

O, another great one. This one with reference to a song. Your ideas are really amazing. You have tons of potential to make your writing known!

I'm impressed. All of your poetry shows lots of emotion and isn't over the top.

OMg I like this alot, it reminds me of when I had this crush on this guy but he had a girl friend and wouldn't notice me but after he dumped her he wanted me but i didn't want him ne more.

wow...that was really good

I identify in some way with thgis poem... Very good.

great wording, great word breaks. an all about awesome poem.

i loved it very good feelings
the feeling is something that i have felt may times befor and expect to many more times.

Hey first of all thanks for reviewing my poem...this is a pretty good poem..it has emotion behind it. Good job.

Great rhyme, amazing wording, and I love the whole poem. Superb job, keep it up!