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| Kapoo 2008-02-15 ch 1,   | it has nice flow |
| Precious Death's Whisper 2005-10-13 ch 1, | Oh! This is extraordinary! I love it! =) I'm adding it to my favorites. Write on! ~PDW |
| Hopeful Light 2005-07-19 ch 1, | Losing someone you care for is more painful than getting shot. Great work. |
| katmonkey 2005-06-03 ch 1, | Amazing poem with lots of emotion. Nicely written. *lime-girl* |
| AllyCred 2005-03-31 ch 1, | very nice...i have to say the whole thing is just amazing...i love it...couldn't say this better myself even if i tried...well done...just amazing. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
| AlwaysAmberella 2005-03-31 ch 1, | I dont think the last line really fits. I dont know maybe its just me, but i loved the rest. Keep it up.*Lady Solitaire* |
| Out-Of-Reality 2005-02-12 ch 1, | O, another great one. This one with reference to a song. Your ideas are really amazing. You have tons of potential to make your writing known! |
| the murder mystery 2004-06-05 ch 1, | I'm impressed. All of your poetry shows lots of emotion and isn't over the top. |
| Candyluv18 2004-04-22 ch 1, | OMg I like this alot, it reminds me of when I had this crush on this guy but he had a girl friend and wouldn't notice me but after he dumped her he wanted me but i didn't want him ne more. |
| NNCS 2004-04-20 ch 1, | wow...that was really good |
| Grendel 2004-04-19 ch 1, | I identify in some way with thgis poem... Very good. |
| haunted moonlight 2004-04-18 ch 1, | great wording, great word breaks. an all about awesome poem. |
| Winter'sSong 2004-04-14 ch 1, | i loved it very good feelings the feeling is something that i have felt may times befor and expect to many more times. |
| Death-By-Papercut 2004-04-14 ch 1, | Hey first of all thanks for reviewing my poem...this is a pretty good poem..it has emotion behind it. Good job. |
| Master Mind4 2004-04-14 ch 1, | Great rhyme, amazing wording, and I love the whole poem. Superb job, keep it up! |