|Reviews for Tears Will Fall|
| bagelmoo 4/20/04 . chapter 6
Good getting into the plot, but be careful about rushing the story. Joelle and George seem too... soon. Try to show more of the development of their relationship.
| bagelmoo 4/19/04 . chapter 4
Oh, dorm rooms. Do they have to share? If not things could get pretty kinky... Haha, I'm kidding. XD
| bagelmoo 4/18/04 . chapter 3
Arg, why does she wanna go? Tell me!
| bagelmoo 4/15/04 . chapter 2
I wanna know if she gets in! Well, okay, obviously she gets in, but I wanna see if it helps her out! Update quickly, please! )
| bagelmoo 4/14/04 . chapter 1
Sounds good, hurry up with the first chapter!