Good getting into the plot, but be careful about rushing the story. Joelle and George seem too... soon. Try to show more of the development of their relationship.

Oh, dorm rooms. Do they have to share? If not things could get pretty kinky... Haha, I'm kidding. XD

Arg, why does she wanna go? Tell me!

I wanna know if she gets in! Well, okay, obviously she gets in, but I wanna see if it helps her out! Update quickly, please! )

Sounds good, hurry up with the first chapter!