NIcely written piece here, the lack opf punctuation made this seem more like a rather long trail of thought forcing the reader to keep up the pace. A very hard hitting scenario and great write _

Nice. I can relate. It's a bit, well, I can't really put it into words. Confusing, maybe? nah... _;; Even if it was, I LOVE poems like that. What am I saying? ALL poems are like that! :P Most anyway. I love it!