Wow. I can't even find the right words to describe this poem. It tugs at my heart, your writing. Yet again, you write what I couldn't manage to make sound okay. Keep it up!

I totally can relate to this. I, myself, tried to write a poem describing this very set of emotions, but it failed. The imigary produces such vivid feeling. In lines 5-7, the repetitive usage of "my" emphasises the title and point of the poem very profoundly. The way the words flow is just so perfect; there really is no other word! You are a fantastic writer! Keep writing!

This happened to me. It took me years to understand. It's nice to see years in 25 lines.

fricking awesome hoe! brings back so much ** but hey what doesnt to kitty...its really ** awesome though dude it can be interpreted so awesome-ly...keep the ** up its awesome...
godamn i hadnt realized how many ** times i say awesome obnoxiousness lol ok well i'll leave now before i combust
awes- umm kick ** though!
kitty

i like it...
*jules*