Wow! I'm surprised that you don't have more reviews on this! This is really good! The flow is mostly smooth, the emotion has a dull, pulsing feel to it. Like you've given up, but something deep inside you still wants to pull itself back out and scream 'LOOK AT ME!' for all those people who never appreciated you the way you were meant to be appreciated. Like you want to be left alone, when that's honestly the last thing you need. Very, very good job. This piece is going on my favorites list. Be blessed.
~Serene Waters

*hugs* i feel ya chica.
this poem was just so well organised. it made such clear sense, everything was so fully emphasised for it was all so perfectly arranged, the order, the sequencing, the repitition. it really drilled the ideas, the emotions, the feelings, the implications into your mind, your soul. made you really feel it. the stanza which i really liked, because it was so mysterious but very moving was this one, and the one which follwed relating to it...
"No matter how much I love
Some still don't react
No matter how mean I am
Some keep coming back"
the coming back bit was very thought provoking. great work, kudos!

I love that last stanza its very powerful... great job