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| g 2006-06-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi. I love this one and your "Screen name adventures." They really are funny, random is what we like! I'm hooked. |
| Hell's first Icicle 2006-05-11 ch 1,  | abuselmao. a realli original idea! the end was slightly suprising...i expected this sumwat wound out ending in which they returned to their lovely normal lives... and ur ending was so much betta. l0lz. that'd be pretty creepy, actualy, the whole idea... esp seeing as mi characters are are homicidal maniacs who always kill eachother off in the end... meheh. and i'd like to keep it that way. newayz, i'll just go on read sum more of ur stories now... |
| Queen of the Shadylands 2006-04-24 ch 1, | abuseLOL.Rather unuaual but very enjoyable.It got slightly confusing at points and i think you should have used a different font or italics when William was meant to be writing the story or something. Anywhy I liked the idea, people don't really think about the feelings of the characters nowadays. I think I too would get rather frustrated if my characters revolted, hope it doesn't happen. Good, funny story. |
| Pink Squishy Llama 2006-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseLol. It's, uh, ORIGINAL. And HILARIOUS! |
| Myufisian 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseThat's a very amusing story. Odd, weird, and funny. Great job. |
| Grez 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abuseHee Hee! This is really funny. It reminds me of those cartoons where the artist and the cartoon character start arguing and different things get 'drawn' into the story. Anywho your teacher should get their sense of humour sent away for tests if they didn't find that amusing! x |
| leylakedi 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abuseHeeheehee! that was great! sort of confusing, but I suppose it's meant to be.Your succinct and superb writing really helps add to the humor. Cool stuff! -L- |
| Tabbi712 2005-06-26 ch 1, | abuseI've read a few books like this. They're definitely humorous. |
| Revan and Emmett 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abuseRevan: Woo, great story! |
| Beachchick 2005-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! This was really good. I was laughing and laughing. I've never read anything like this before. |
| minda 2005-03-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought this was hilarious! :) I've never come across something like this before and all I can say is that it was great! lol I wonder what the characters are doing now... ^_^ |
| ta1nt3d1uv 2005-02-08 ch 1, | abuselmao nice story:-) |
| LMS-W 2005-02-04 ch 1, | abuselol, I found this to be very funny, characters on a rampage, holding people hostage, I can see it happening! btw, please r&r my stories! |
| hahaguy 2005-02-04 ch 1, | abuseSomething new for me. I like it. |
| angelswing 2005-01-18 ch 1, | abuselol ya know, the same thing has happened to me one to many times! when characters rebel!! Love it! |