This is a very sad poem, but I still loved it very much.

*is crying* that was so good... BUT SAD! WAH! T_T

loving it. a teardrop... so sad, so full of emotion. it can hold a persons everythin in them

Oh my god. that was the best and themost sad poem that i've ever read in my whole life. *pushs back tears* Keep up the good work.Because you'll go far with this peom. I quartnee it.

That was beautiful

interesting. that was a really thoughtful peice of work. but i think u can make the writing more stylish, if you know what i mean.

This is so beautiful.. you should really listen to this while listening to two teardrops bye steve wariner.. it's awsome

Impressive, Love the stucture you've made. you're right... it can be as a poem. i think you can make a poem about it if you really want to. I am looking forward in seeing that poem because the idea is great.

Excellent poem, Phoenix. Your repetition is awesome throughout the passage. Neat work. I am DEFINETLY putting you on my favorites list, as I rightfully should after all the reviews you've given me...golly, I should repay you somehow; perhaps I will write a poem about it. Take care, and thank you for reading my work, it is greatly appreciated. Write on!

Very sad, the epitomy of the tear. While sad, it is very good.