Very eloquent, and flows beautifully. An interesting mental picture is it not? And strange how so many people (including myself) sem to relate to poems such as these. I shall certainly return to your page to read more. I have added you to my 'Favorite Authors' list. And thank you for your review on 'Shattered Rainbow'. It is appreciated.

Nice detail. It's very easy to picture and relate to. Keep writing!

Being noticed does mean everything. Mostly because most humans have a yearning to be popular. This is a wonderful poem.

This is a good poe, I'm sure that many can relate to this. It flows nicely and I could see the images in my head when I read this.

Keep it up.

Thanks for reviewing my poems.

fading away - the story of my life...so beautifully done...these words are amazing and the imagery is just great...so sad this is but eloquently done. lots of love ~AllyCred~

i thin im running out of compliments, but i guess thats the price you pay when you come in contact with such a gifted poet keep it up*Lady Solitaire*

Makes a lot of sense...I really like this one too...Never stop writing.

I'm really moved by all of your poetry. It all just makes me speechless.

Awesome! Good, if simple (sometimes simple is purely classic), rhyme scheme. Emotion fluidly expressed. The poem itself flowed well. Good jpb!

i thought that was a very good poem and i also thought that it was well written!

Love you writting, it's my favorite type.. . with meaning and criptic. More !

such a powerful poem. one of my favorites.

Aw, very sad. I can relate. Good poem.

I like it, it 'reads' really well if you know what I mean. It conveys the harshness of reality well. keep it up!