I have to say that this is a really good poem I like it a lot!

Beautiful... really great work, I don't know what to say, but I really like it...

wow...that was sad! *sniff* i just *sniff sniff* hope that i figure out what vituperative means!

I so know how you feel. When my dad quit drinking it was the happiest time in my life. He loved me when he was sober and actually made good decisions about what to do with his kids. Now, since he started again, everything's not right. I like your poem. It just flows really well.