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| Ivy Orion 2004-12-19 ch 1,   | You are so talented! I love this; its wonderful! Tee-hee! So prettily written... |
| pabo 2004-11-14 ch 1, | very nice! interesting material, but watch out for the rythm, it's a bit off sometimes |
| green and winged 2004-07-13 ch 1, | hey hey julie babe! wonderful poem. simply fantstic. (and don't you dare be humble and say it's not that good! 'cause it's GREAT!! you should be scrawling them on the walls by now! power to ya!! *fist up*) love ye, dear! |
| Band Geek17 2004-06-29 ch 1, | This is great! The message that being you is all you need is clear at the end, but the way you lead up to it is completely original. That's wonderful - I HATE cliches. That's one reason I like your writing; it's not cliche at ALL ;-). |
| Grape 2004-06-04 ch 1, | Wow this is really great! I like how it totally flows along and makes lots of sense...*sweat* unlike someone I know. Anyways great poem! |
| Ridley Jack 2004-05-16 ch 1, | I love this poem! (which is suprising, because I like very few poems) |
| Adeleste 2004-04-19 ch 1, | wow, this is a really, really good poem! I like it a lot! It's got a lot of emotions and things going on in it that makes it so great!! You're a good author, you realize that? ^_^ it rythmes too!! something I really can't do! |
| fire byrd dancer 2004-04-17 ch 1, | YAYAYAYAYAY I love it! It is so romantic and fantastical and any fantacy girl would love it. *Giggles maddly and dances wildly* Sorry I literaly just got home from California and... *Huggles* had such an wonderful poem waiting for me!! |
| kazfuego 2004-04-16 ch 1, | omg. that was so cool! it's like something that came out of a book. i'm definitely adding this to my faves. oh, and if you want, you can check out my, 'the elven song'. but you don't really have to. luv ya! mwah! -kaz |
| Sig1 2004-04-15 ch 1, | Wowzers, I like this. It kinda... captures something, you know? This is great! |
| Cosmos Senshi 2004-04-15 ch 1, | Really good! The rhyming scheme was really thought out. Nice work! |
| Sterces 2004-04-15 ch 1, | O! I LOVE this! You're rhymes were wonderful! It's nice to see a fantasy that's not cheesy and out of rhythm. This was nice. I am going to check out some of your other stuff now! Wow! |