|Reviews for Dying|
| Akai Yami no Naka 4/16/04 . chapter 1
Your poems seem really immature and clichéd. You need to respect yourself more than that, sister - you're a person, an individual, with your own mannerisms and ideas. You're not just another number, so don't write like it; once again, you really need to respect yourself more than that.
| E.m.p.t.y.H.o.r.i.z.o.n 4/15/04 . chapter 1
Emotional. Reminds me of "Control It" by Static X
| Sterces 4/15/04 . chapter 1
Wow. I've never seen a poem quite like this before! Write on!