I know how that feels? I just got lucky and didn't have to die. I'm sry. Great job. It had a rhythm and a something that just gave it a ring, ya know? It was a great piece. Keep it up.

I liked this, because my mother was killed in a car accident, not an intersection crash, but nevertheless, it was a crash. I don't really like these set ups, but for this poem it worked rather well. Keep writing :]
-Meg