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Reviews For: Amber Waves of Grain
caceybrown 2004-05-22 . chapter 1
This story was really good!I liked it alot
JD Kennedy 2004-04-29 . chapter 3
Yeah, it's a good start. A little sad too, keep updating this one :)
R&R me,
~ JD
Chris Fannin 2004-04-27 . chapter 3
Looking good so far, although I don't know what a kid would be doing with a German accent if she moved to America when she was one and "spoke good English" by the time she was three. Especially by high school, she should have basically automatically conformed to the local accent. At first, the first person perspective felt odd, but I got used to it. Overall, it's a good story. Looking forward to the conclusion!
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