Yo my beesey my beautiful mummer girl! You are awesome and I Love you too...even though I'm assuming this was about Mark. Tee-hee! You are a wonderful writer (but I would Love you even if you weren't)Sorry I didn't submit sooner, but I just figured out how! Love, Sammie I.

This seems somewhat familiar... Like I've read it before, or felt the exact same way...
It's really good the way you permeate ever paragraph with a single word on it's line. That helps with the emotion of the work.